tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619928794619189562.post2983274710760242022..comments2016-12-10T20:58:51.744-08:00Comments on MW English 1109 Writing Blog: Mike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619928794619189562.post-59881189944851812522016-09-21T09:17:02.938-07:002016-09-21T09:17:02.938-07:00i like how much description you use in this story ...i like how much description you use in this story its puts you in the story and right mind set by the words you chose to use when your telling your story Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18126771066928511813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619928794619189562.post-77488711917136114012016-09-21T09:16:57.205-07:002016-09-21T09:16:57.205-07:00i like how much description you use in this story ...i like how much description you use in this story its puts you in the story and right mind set by the words you chose to use when your telling your story Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18126771066928511813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619928794619189562.post-75262611297608779442016-09-21T09:09:48.417-07:002016-09-21T09:09:48.417-07:00I love how you let something that didn't end u...I love how you let something that didn't end up happening to you and you used it as a life lesson and having it change your mindset.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00066159745591362737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619928794619189562.post-1073954769697938262016-09-21T09:06:04.321-07:002016-09-21T09:06:04.321-07:00I like how you describe what was on your mind afte...I like how you describe what was on your mind after the light flashes between your eyes. It gives me a detailed imagery of what happen to you.Timmy Lehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01533028711518919041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619928794619189562.post-36391384641708693632016-09-21T08:58:11.348-07:002016-09-21T08:58:11.348-07:00I thought when you said "I stared into the de...I thought when you said "I stared into the devils eyes and he craved to take me" was the most original and creative part. I also thought the writing was at its best when you said your life flased before your eyes! Thats scary!! I'm glad you were okay. Dominique Sanduskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00033309308402442539noreply@blogger.com