D, I think your characterization of place is really strong here, and this was one very good scene when you entered that old asylum. I wanted some more reflection and conclusion but what you have here is engaging and well read, despite you being so ill this week. Hope you are getting better and thanks for posting this!
D, I think your characterization of place is really strong here, and this was one very good scene when you entered that old asylum. I wanted some more reflection and conclusion but what you have here is engaging and well read, despite you being so ill this week. Hope you are getting better and thanks for posting this!
ReplyDelete