Wednesday, September 21, 2016

Terrified

This  story  is  based on when  I  was  about  13 my family  and  I  went  to  a haunted  house  I  was  petrified the  whole  way  there.  This  will  be  my  first  hundred  house that I have been too. You see i'm not that  big of a fan of things that scare me not even movies. So i was nervous the whole way there asking question of  what it was going to be like, if they was scared and things like that but of course it's my family and they over exaggerated it and  make it worse than what it really was to make me even more scared by the time we got there i was freaking out already and i had just got out of the car .  my hands was sweaty, i could not stop moving , my belly was in knots, and I felt nashua.
When we got in line i said “ that i don't want to do this anymore.” my uncle told me “we are here and I bought your ticket already is too late to back out if you don't do this i'm never taking you anywhere again“ he said with the most secures face I have ever seen “ find i'll do it  but i'm going to cry like a baby .” I told him with my teenage attitude his response to that was “ “good that means that it will be funny” he says as he laughs as the line moves forward I tell myself that it can do this.
I started in the haunted house and it was not so bad and i got cocky that it was not scaring me but i took a few more steps, then the chainsaws started and I took off running I did not know where I was going nor could I see then suddenly I ran into something hard the next thing i know is the thing I ran into was chasing me too so now the guys with the chainsaw was running after me and the person that i ran into is also. Then i came to a stop there was no where else to go there was a fence in my way and they had me corned . I dropped down into a ball and was hysterically crying. I could not move , i could not breath they all started to back off turned the chainsaws off and all the light come on.
My sister, bother, his friend, and uncle all came over to me. Telling me that it was over but I still did not move for what felt like days but it was only five or so minutes I was just there sitting like a brack. No One could get me to move. I finally calmed down and got up and started to walk out. The person running the haunted house asked me if i was okay and give me a box of popcorn that they was sealing. We all walked back to our car and drove home.  

3 comments:

  1. I like the part where you said "by the time we got there i was freaking out already and i had just got out of the car . my hands was sweaty, i could not stop moving , my belly was in knots, and I felt nashua.", I thought this is very descriptive of how you were feeling.

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  2. I can relate to this story by a personal story of by going to a haunted house and i do not like scary things or movies.

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  3. I can relate to this story by a personal story of by going to a haunted house and i do not like scary things or movies.

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