For your comments on Presentations:
First, write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best? Be specific, and use a specific example from the Presentation and your notes.
Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might
have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least
polished? Be specific.
1.) Great detail, and showing detail about the positive and negative impacts, it was very clear
ReplyDelete2.) What is the significant thing about him? Is he good or bad, like a better conclusion
1. I like your information on the negative impacts of Mark.
ReplyDelete2. I think that the presentation should have more positive influences because I remember more of his negative influences.
1. I liked your positive and negative reasons for his creation of Facebook
ReplyDelete2. I think you focused too much on Facebooks impacts then Marks impacts
1)Lots of information that I didn't know about Mark and it was very interesting
ReplyDelete2)Only a couple positive things on Mark
1- Very good information on Mark that i would have never known.
ReplyDelete2- The negatives of him needed a little more information.
1.) Great information about him and Facebook that I did not know.
ReplyDelete2.) Could of said more positive things about him so we could understand his good and bad side.
Not very many positives on Mark.
ReplyDeleteAnd didn't know he was a college dropout.
1)I really like your quote you provided at the start of your presentation. I learned a lot about him, like 1,079 million use facebook and he donated $100 million to a school district.
ReplyDelete2)Try to add a few more positives if you want to make him sound a little better.